Should I Write in Third Person Limited?

There are two ways to look at third person limited.

1. A “narrator” narrates the story, using “he”, “she”, and “they” pronouns, but this narrator only knows the thoughts and feelings of only one character, usually the protagonist. This narrator follows the main character throughout the story and stays in this character’s perspective.

2. The main character narrates the story but, instead of using “I” and “we”, uses “he”, “she”, and “they” pronouns. The main character is indirectly speaking to the reader, and the character’s voice is in the narration. Some people call this POV third person close or deep third person limited.

Third person limited has evolved and skyrocketed in popularity over the last few decades. Overall, third person limited is limited to one perspective. On most writing websites, you’ll find the first definition to define third person limited. The traditional one is like third person omniscient, where there is a narrator, except that you focus on only one character. Nowadays, more third person limited books are written in deep POV.

 

What is Deep POV?
Deep POV means going through the eyes of the character. First person is naturally a deep POV because we are already in the main character’s head. For deep third person limited, we are eliminating that third-party narrator and letting the protagonist tell the story, only except with first person pronouns, the protagonist is using “he”, “she”, and “they” instead. I describe deep third person limited as the protagonist indirectly telling the story because it helps new writers distinguish third person limited and omniscient.

In the traditional third person limited, the narrator would have a neutral voice. For deep third person limited, the character’s voice is in the narration. Since the character is the narrator for deep POV, the reader experiences what the character is doing, thinking, and feeling, like in first person.

Here’s what traditional third person limited looks like:

The crowd packed the whole arena. There were so many people that the heat was pushing past the tolerating point, but Ryan didn’t mind. He was having the time of his life as he listened to his favorite rock band performing on stage, just a few feet away from him. I hope this night never ends, he thought.

In this example, there is distance between the person who is telling the story and our main character. The sentence “The crowd packed the whole arena” gives an image of the whole arena, rather than zooming in on Ryan. The narration is neutral and doesn’t have Ryan’s voice.

Here’s what deep third person limited looks like:

The vibrations of people stomping and dancing resonated in Ryan’s chest. How many were here in this arena? Hundreds? Thousands? Well, enough bodies packed together for a scorching heat wave to possess the air, but whatever. The best rock band was playing on stage, and Ryan had scored the best place in the show—first row, so close that the singer could kick him in the chin. If only this night would never end.

In this example, there is little distance between the reader and Ryan. The biggest evidence that we’re in deep POV is how Ryan’s voice is in the narration. Sentences such as “How many were here in this arena? Hundreds? Thousands?” and “The best rock band was playing on stage” and “so close that the singer could kick him in the chin” come from Ryan. These lines have Ryan’s personality and his voice. Also, we didn’t have to say, “I hope this night never ends, Ryan thought” because the line “If only this night would never end” is Ryan thinking that. For deep POV, we can omit dialogue tags for inner monologues.

So here’s a quick review of traditional and deep third person limited.

Things Traditional and Deep Have in Common:
-We follow only one character throughout the story, usually the protagonist
-We only know what the character knows and experiences. If the character does not see, hear, taste, touch, or smell it, we don’t know it
-We get to know the thoughts and feeling of this one character

Only In Traditional Third Person Limited:
-There’s a third-party narrator
-The voice in the narration is neutral
-The character’s thoughts are expressed with dialogue tags
-Some filtering is okay

Only In Deep Third Person Limited:
-The character is telling the story, indirectly
-The character’s voice is in the narration
-There are no dialogue tags to express the character’s thoughts
-Filtering is highly discouraged
-Deep POV is more limited than traditional. For deep, we are looking through the eyes of the character (meaning you cannot write about actions from your character’s facial features because we cannot see our own faces. So for example, you can’t say that your character’s face turned red. You would have to write these actions in the sense that your character felt them)

 

Advantages:
Compare to the other third person point of views, third person limited allows closeness between the reader and character. Whether you’re writing in the traditional or deep, the reader is much closer to the character compare to objective and omniscient POV, though deep third limited is much closer than traditional.

Along with first person, third person limited can help new writers build their craft. Focusing on one character can help you discover your writing voice and style. Also like in first person, it’s easier for the reader to know and understand the protagonist’s goals and motivation in third person limited.

Lastly, while deep third person limited isn’t as intimate as first person, this POV is the only third person that allows the readers to pretend that they’re the main character. The readers can feel they are part of the story.

 

Disadvantages:
Like first person, the reader is only exposed to what the character experiences. This POV limits your story. The character cannot reveal any events that happen without his or her presence.

Also, the same disadvantage that first person has, the protagonist can be unreliable. The main character could misinterpret another person or an important detail, though in some books, the protagonist is not supposed to be reliable.

 

Problems That Occur When Writing in Third Person Limited Person:
A common problem with third person is that a writer can accidentally write in BOTH third person omniscient and deep limited. I mentioned this problem already in my third person omniscient post. This problem occurs because the writer doesn’t know the difference between the two third person POVs.

Another problem is inconsistently switching back and forth from traditional third to deep third. As said before, these two limited POVs have two different narrators, and inconsistencies in the narration are jarring to the reader.

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2 thoughts on “Should I Write in Third Person Limited?

  1. I just want to say thank you so much for this article. It was incredibly informative and will help me immensely in my future writing. Thank you, thank you, thank you! I’ve been so confused about point of views and different approaches and you’ve cleared it up for me. Thanks a ton!

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